Persians on the Road

[Tina]

I always wanted to write something...with catz in it. Tell me what you think so far, you might find it on Feathered as a Flash cartoon =]

Episode 1 Script

{The episode starts with a Persian named Laize walking through the city on a rainy day}

Laize: {sighs} If there was someone to have fun with, I’d join them…
??: You asking for some fun? Come over here.
{Laize walks over to the anonymous cat}
Laize: Who are you?
??: {laugh} My name, you’d like? It’s Trisha.
Laize: Trisha…are you a member of the city’s Alley Cat Crew?
Trisha: Indeed I am. They may seem like a mean gang at first, but they are quite nice to newcomers. It’s the cats that are a part of other gangs they don’t like. And your name is…?
Laize: Me? Oh, I’m just a Persian named Laize…I feel quite lonely with all these Alley mixes.
Trisha: Y’know, I’m actually a Persian as well.
{A banging occurs and startles Laize}
Laize: Ack! What was that?! Thunder?!
Trisha: {giggle} Oh, that’s just the dinner crash. That means we should wander around for some food.
Laize: Hey! I’ll show your crew a great place to eat…
{Trisha stares wide eyed.}
Trisha: R-really? I’ll go tell the team!
{Trisha lets Laize come inside their private alley}
Trisha: This guy right here, Laize, says he knows a good place to eat. Shall we follow him?
Crew Leader: Sure, why not.
{The crew follows Laize into the eating area}
Laize: Here it is. “Alley Eatery”.
Trisha: A RESTAURANT? We’re alley cats, not fancy cats!
Laize: Fine then. Go through your garbage.
Trisha: Well, I’m going inside. Garbage is nasty…
{The Persians walk inside the building and sniff the good scent}
Laize: This is Alley Eatery. Ask that guy right there and point to what you want.
Trisha: {puts a wishy-washy face on} But they might drag us out…
Laize: Tsk tsk. They know how hard it is to be an alley cat, just tell them what you want.
{Laize hops on the counter}
Laize: Barbeque Ribs please. {He points to the ribs’ picture.}
Person: The ribs? Coming up!
Laize: Thank you! {whispers to Trisha} Heh, see?
Trisha: Okay, I think I’ll order something now.
{Trisha jumps onto the counter}
Trisha: One Hamburger please. {She points to the hamburger picture.}
Laize: I’m gonna tell the crew that the coast is clear, okay?
Trisha: Sure, why not.
Laize: {in a soft whisper} Hey, the coast is clear. Come inside…

{After the “feast”, Trisha leaves the Alley Cat Crew}

Trisha: I always wanted to see the world, you know?
Laize: Me too. See that stand over there? They have free basket cars.
Trisha: Really?
Laize: I’m going to get us two, okay?
Trisha: Our adventures are just about to unfold…

To be continued...

[Krissa]

It has an interesting start, curiousity, do the people actually understand the catz, or just the catz's gestures? :-)

So, is there going to be an antagonist, or build up to another adventure... I'm curious to know what happens. :-)

[Tina]

People understand the cat's gestures =] Laize and Trisha don't know that humans just hear meowing, lol. As for antagonist, if I remember my notes there will be a wolf stalking the persians XD And there are 5 main characters - Laize, Trisha, Hare, Peace, and Rocky =]

[Krissa]

Ahh, I see. :-)